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The below table show how much money spend in different cities.

The below table show how much money spend in different cities. nXLKn
The table compares the amount of money spent for a cup of coffee in six cities located in Australia over four-year period. In 2010, Perth costs highest price of a cup of coffee compare to the other, after that Brisbane and Canberra are in second rank of pricing a cup of coffee. Surprisingly, in 2010 a cup of coffee in Sydney and Melbourne cost the lower amount than others; however, they saw a big change of Price after 4 years. It is clear that in 2010 each cup of Coffee had bought $ 3. 70 which was the most expensive one and Brisbane and Canberra had bought every cup of coffee $ 3. 35; however, after 4 years it cost $ 3. 95. This means that Perth saw an increase, with 6. 8%. It is needless to say that although in 2010 a cup of coffee in Sydney and Melbourne cost the lowest amount of money, which was $ 3. 10 and $ 3. 15 respectively; however, These cities experience for the most changes, with 8. 1% and 9. 5% in 2014.
The table compares the amount of money spent for a
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in six cities located in Australia over four-year period.

In 2010, Perth
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in Sydney and Melbourne
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the lower amount than others;
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of Price after 4 years.

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that in 2010 each
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. 95. This means that Perth
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an increase, with 6. 8%.

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in Sydney and Melbourne
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the lowest amount of money, which was
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. 10 and
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, with 8. 1% and 9. 5% in 2014.
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