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A glance at the provided diagram reveals the main methods which are used by Bristol to cope with problems concerning water pollution.

A glance at the provided diagram reveals the main methods which are used by Bristol to cope with problems concerning water pollution. q0xB5

A glance at the provided diagram reveals the main methods which are used by Bristol to cope with problems concerning water pollution. It is evident that some of the dirty water joins oceans and rivers without being cleaned. Probing further, dirty water, which is constituted due to human usage, goes in three directions. It is vital to emphasize that those two directions are blended with ocean and river water since merely one direction is sent to sewage treatment plants, where they are fertilized. Resulting clean water is combined with rivers and streams. In the procedure of creation of clean water for human usage again, river/stream water is diverted either to reservoirs and then to water treatment plants or directly to the latter destination. Water is cleaned and fresh water is formed in the last step. Overall, Bristol does not seem to have a great contribution towards the protection of the environment since the majority of dirty water is polluting oceans and rivers.

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some of the
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water
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joins
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rivers
 without being cleaned
.

Probing further
, dirty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, which is constituted
 due to human usage, goes in three directions. It is vital to emphasize that those two directions are blended
 with ocean and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 since merely
 one direction is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to sewage treatment plants, where they are fertilized
. Resulting clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is combined
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
rivers
 and streams. In the procedure of creation of clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 for human usage again, river/stream You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is diverted
 either to reservoirs and then to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 treatment plants or directly
 to the latter destination. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
Water
is cleaned
 and fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is formed
 in the last step.

Overall
, Bristol does not seem to have a great contribution towards the protection of the environment since the majority of dirty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is polluting oceans and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
rivers
. 