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THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES TOOK PLACE AT A HEALTH CENTER FROM YEAR 2005 TILL PRESENT DAY.

THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES TOOK PLACE AT A HEALTH CENTER FROM YEAR 2005 TILL PRESENT DAY. EwkQx
THE PROVIDED MAPS ILLUSTRATES THE CHANGES EXPERIENCED BY HEALTH CENTER IN SIXTEEN YEAR FROM 2005 TO 2021. OVERALL, THE HEALTH CENTER FACED SIGNIFICANT CHANGES AND MORE FACILITIES ARE INTRODUCED IN CURRENT LAYOUT. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE SIZE OF CAR PARKING IN SOUTH INCREASES DRASTICALLY FROM 12 SPACE TO 30 SPACE FOR VEHICLES WHEREAS, PLACE FOR CONSULTING ROOM 1 DIMINISHES THAN PREVIOUS PLAN. THE ENTRANCE OF HEALTH CENTRE MOVES FROM SOUTH TO SOUTH EAST AND CHILDREN PLAY AREA IS CONSTRUCTED IN RIGHT SIDE OF ENTRANCE. THE PLACE FOR RECEPTION DESK TRANSFER IN THE LEFT SIDE OF ENTRANCE WHILE, SEATING AREA IN CENTER CONSTRUCTED IN ALL DIRECTION. THE MAP FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN NORTH, MINOR OPERATION ROOM IS CONSTRUCTED NEAR PHYSIOTHERAPY ROOM WHICH, REMAIN THE SAME IN GIVEN PERIOD. THE OFFICE AREA FACED CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT AND CR 4 IS DEVELOPED IN PRESENT PLAN HOWEVER, CR2 DEMOLISHEDIN PURPOSED LAYOUT. FINALLY, CR3 MOVES FROM SOUTH-EAST TO SOUTH-WEST SIDE OF MAP.
THE PROVIDED MAPS
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ILLUSTRATES
THE
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CHANGES
EXPERIENCED BY HEALTH CENTER IN SIXTEEN YEAR FROM 2005 TO 2021.

OVERALL
, THE HEALTH CENTER FACED SIGNIFICANT
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CHANGES
AND MORE FACILITIES
ARE INTRODUCED
IN
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CURRENT
LAYOUT.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, THE SIZE OF CAR PARKING IN SOUTH INCREASES
DRASTICALLY
FROM 12 SPACE TO 30 SPACE FOR VEHICLES WHEREAS, PLACE FOR CONSULTING ROOM 1 DIMINISHES THAN PREVIOUS PLAN. THE ENTRANCE OF HEALTH
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CENTRE
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MOVES
FROM SOUTH TO SOUTH EAST AND CHILDREN PLAY AREA
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN RIGHT SIDE OF ENTRANCE. THE PLACE FOR RECEPTION DESK TRANSFER IN THE
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LEFT
SIDE OF ENTRANCE WHILE, SEATING AREA IN CENTER CONSTRUCTED IN ALL DIRECTION.

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THE
MAP
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN NORTH, MINOR OPERATION ROOM
IS CONSTRUCTED
NEAR PHYSIOTHERAPY ROOM WHICH, REMAIN THE SAME IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD.
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THE
OFFICE AREA FACED CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT AND CR 4
IS DEVELOPED
IN PRESENT PLAN
HOWEVER
, CR2
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DEMOLISHEDIN
PURPOSED LAYOUT.
FINALLY
, CR3
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MOVES
FROM SOUTH-EAST TO SOUTH-WEST SIDE OF MAP.

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