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THE BELOW MAP SHOW THE CHANGES TAHT TOOK PLACE OVER THE PERIOD AT WEST PARK SCHOOL.

THE BELOW MAP SHOW THE CHANGES TAHT TOOK PLACE OVER THE PERIOD AT WEST PARK SCHOOL. QRJm1
THE PROVIDED MAP ILLUSTRATE THE CHANGES EXPERIENCED BY WEST PARK SCHOOL IN SIXTY YEARS FROM 1950 TO 2010. OVERALL, WEST SCHOOL FACED SIGNIFICANT CHANGES IN GIVEN PERIOD AND MORE FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN LATTER LAYOUT. THE MAIN ROAD REMAINS THE SAME REAGRDLESS OF CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN WEST SIDE THE HOUSES DEMOLISHED IN THREE DECADES WHEREAS, THE CAR PARK IS CONSTRUCTED IN SIMILAR PLACE. THE BUILDING OF SCHOOL RENAMED AS SCHOOL (MAIN BUILDING) WHILE, IN SOUTH-EAST FARMLAND IS DECONSTRUCTED FOR NEW SPORTS FIELD IN 1980. PLAYGROUND IN NORTH-WEST REMAIN CONSTANT FROM 1950-1980. THE MAPS FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN 2010, THE SIZE OF CAR PARK ELEVATED DRASTICALLY WHILST, THE AREA OF SPORTS FIELDS CONTRACTS IN SIMILAR PERIOD. THERE IS NO CHANGE IN PLACE FOR SCIENCE BLOCK AND MAIN BUILDING HOWEVER, THE AREA FOR PLAYGROUND DECREASES DRAMATICALLY IN 2010.
THE PROVIDED MAP ILLUSTRATE THE
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CHANGES
EXPERIENCED BY WEST PARK
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SCHOOL
IN SIXTY YEARS FROM 1950 TO 2010.

OVERALL
, WEST
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SCHOOL
FACED SIGNIFICANT
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CHANGES
IN
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GIVEN
PERIOD AND MORE FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN LATTER LAYOUT. THE MAIN ROAD REMAINS THE SAME
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REAGRDLESS
OF CONSTRUCTIVE DEVELOPMENT.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, IN WEST SIDE THE
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HOUSES
DEMOLISHED IN THREE DECADES WHEREAS, THE CAR PARK
IS CONSTRUCTED
IN SIMILAR PLACE. THE BUILDING OF
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SCHOOL
RENAMED AS
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SCHOOL
(MAIN BUILDING) WHILE, IN SOUTH-EAST FARMLAND
IS DECONSTRUCTED
FOR NEW SPORTS FIELD IN 1980. PLAYGROUND IN NORTH-WEST REMAIN CONSTANT FROM 1950-1980.

THE MAPS
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN 2010, THE SIZE OF CAR PARK ELEVATED
DRASTICALLY
WHILST, THE AREA OF SPORTS FIELDS CONTRACTS IN SIMILAR PERIOD. THERE IS NO
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CHANGE
IN PLACE FOR SCIENCE BLOCK AND MAIN BUILDING
HOWEVER
, THE AREA FOR PLAYGROUND DECREASES
DRAMATICALLY
IN 2010.
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