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The graph illustrates the amount of international tourists in millions from January to December, while the bar chart represents the tourist directions over the region during the same year. Both the graph and chart are passed on a survey of number of visitors in 2005. Overall, it is clear from the graph that August was the most popular month of tourism over a year. By the lage margin, France was the highst country that many human beings visited in a period of 2005. In July, there were 119 millions of tourists in 2005, increased almost sightly above than 140 millions in August. In contrast, there were only less than 20 millions of visitors during January and December, followed by February and March, which were remained stable. On the other hand, more than 60 millions of people were going to visit France, but this amount decreased in some counties such as: UK, China, Polanda, Mexico, Canada and Hungary, which had less than 30 millions. Before 17 years, August became the greatest month of tourist as about uper than 140 millions of visitors, and France, USA and Spain contained the highest numper of humens which had more than 40 miilions.
The graph illustrates the amount of international
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tourists
in
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millions
from January to December, while the bar chart represents the
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tourist
directions over the region during the same year. Both the graph and chart
are passed
on a survey of number of visitors in 2005.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the graph that August was the most popular month of tourism over a year. By the
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lage
margin, France was the
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highst
country that
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many
human beings visited in a period of 2005.

In July, there were 119
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millions
of
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tourists
in 2005, increased almost
sightly
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above
than 140
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millions
in August.
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, there were
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only
less than 20
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millions
of visitors during January and December, followed by February and March, which
were remained
stable.

On the other hand
, more than 60
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millions
of
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people
were going to visit France,
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but
this amount decreased in
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Polanda
, Mexico, Canada and Hungary, which had less than 30 millions.

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17 years, August became the greatest month of
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as about
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than 140
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of visitors, and France, USA and Spain contained the highest
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which had more than 40
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