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Describe this map that shows a town of Garlson

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This map depicts Garlson town with two locations for planned super market. IT is clear from the graph that Garlson town lies in the middle of three near town and it connects those town by railways and main roads. According to what is shown, the first possible situation is in the northern country side between a railway and the road which heads to Hinsdon. this location is near to the northern housing units, but far from the southern one and the centre of the town. While the another planned place is planned to be constructed in the central area of the town, which it is not far from the southern residential area nor the northern one. Also it is easy to travel to Bransdon and Cransdon by the main road. Regarding to Hindon, we can also transport there by the Railway that cross the town centre. to sum up, we could say, that the secound area better the first one; because it is easy to reach ther from all the side of the town and also the adjacent towns.
This map depicts
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Garlson
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town
with two locations for planned super market. IT is
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clear
from the graph that
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Garlson
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town
lies in the middle of three near
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town
and it connects those
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town
by railways and main roads.

According to what
is shown
, the
first
possible situation is in the northern country side between a railway and the road which heads to
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Hinsdon
.
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this
location is near to the northern housing units,
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but
far from the southern one and the
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centre
of the town.

While the another planned place
is planned
to
be constructed
in the central area of the
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town
, which it is not far from the southern residential area nor the northern one.
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Also
it is easy to travel to
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Bransdon
and
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Cransdon
by the main road.
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Regarding to
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Hindon
, we can
also
transport there by the Railway that cross the
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town
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centre
.

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to
sum up, we could say, that the
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secound
area better the
first
one;
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because
it is easy to reach
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ther
from all the side of the
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town
and
also
the adjacent
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towns
.
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IELTS academic Describe this map that shows a town of Garlson

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