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This diagram illustrates the procedure of electricity generation from geothermal energy in a geothermal power facility.

This diagram illustrates the procedure of electricity generation from geothermal energy in a geothermal power facility. Overall, cold water is turned into high energy steam in exchanging heat with underground hot rocks and consequently, the hot steam flux energy is used in order to whirl turbines and produce electricity. First, cold water is pumped deeply into the ground from a reserviour. The fluid is pumped all the 4. 5km way down to intection well, where connects it's flow to an underground heat exchanger, called The Geothermal zone. Water will get the chance to absorb heat from hot rocks in the mentioned section and as a result, the temprature of the fluid rises immensely until the water boils. Caustic boiling water is then pumped up towards a condenser. In turn, following section is responsible for increasing pressure and condensing hot water into steam. Steam has a supremely high energy which makes it capable of rotating turbine wings. Further, this rotation and mechanical energy is turned into electricity by a generator. Generator on one hand, inputs mechanical energy, provided by turbin rotation, and on the other hand, delivers a voltage to the output. This electrical potential is then transported via electrical power lines to consumers.
This diagram illustrates the procedure of electricity generation from geothermal
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in a geothermal power facility.
Overall
,
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cold
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water
is turned
into high
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energy
steam in exchanging heat with underground hot rocks and
consequently
, the hot steam flux
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energy
is
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used
in order to whirl turbines and produce electricity.

First
,
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cold
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water
is pumped
deeply
into the ground from a
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reserviour
. The fluid
is pumped
all the 4.
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5km
way down to
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intection
well, where connects
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it's
flow to an underground heat exchanger, called The Geothermal zone.
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Water
will
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get
the chance to absorb heat from hot rocks in the mentioned section and
as a result
, the
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temprature
of the fluid rises
immensely
until the
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water
boils.

Caustic boiling
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water
is then pumped up towards a condenser. In turn, following section is responsible for increasing pressure and condensing hot
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water
into steam. Steam has a
supremely
high
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energy
which
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makes
it capable of rotating turbine wings.
Further
, this rotation and mechanical
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energy
is turned
into electricity by a generator. Generator on one hand, inputs mechanical
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energy
, provided by
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turbin
rotation, and
on the other hand
, delivers a voltage to the output. This electrical potential is then transported via electrical power lines to consumers.
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IELTS academic This diagram illustrates the procedure of electricity generation from geothermal energy in a geothermal power facility.

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