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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map describes the areas which can be potentially used to erect an new leisure centre. There are three possible venues selected as per the map where this centre can be constructed. The first of all the locations is near the factory, despite the location being quite scenic with the river nearby the air pollution from factory might arise as an major issue in this area. If incase the leisure centre have water sports activities there is high possiblity that the river water being polluted. The Second Location is near the Apartments, which seems to be an most benifatable choice. The Leisure centre in this area have an higher chances of attracting the residents of the apartment rather than having it near the factory. The Last of all the choices is the forest area which might be a good economic solution than the other two locations since the land availablity is quite enourmnous than the other two locations but the major drawback would be the impact of the environment since the forest area needs to be cleared and the inhabitants of these forest will suffer.

The map This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizesportrays
describes
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 which can be potentially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to erect Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
an
 new leisure Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
. There are three possible venues selected as per the map where this Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 can be constructed
.

The first
 of all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
locations
 is near the factory, despite the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
location
 being quite scenic with the river nearby the air pollution from factory might arise as Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
an
 major issue in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
Possible spelling mistake found.Incasencaseincisein case
incase
 the leisure Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 have water sports activities there is high Possible spelling mistake found.possibility
possiblity
 that the river water being polluted
.

The Second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
Location
 is near the Apartments, which seems to be Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
an
 most Possible spelling mistake found.beatable
benifatable
 choice. The Leisure Possible spelling mistake. ‘centre’ is British English.center
centre
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 have The plural noun “chances” cannot be used with the article “an”. Did you mean “an higher chance” or “higher chances”?an higher chancehigher chances
an higher chances
 of attracting the residents of the apartment rather
 than having it near the factory.

The Last of all the choices is the forest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 which might be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 economic solution than the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhooddistrictarealocalevenueregion
locations
 since the land Possible spelling mistake found.availability
availablity
 is quite Possible spelling mistake found.enormous
enourmnous
 than the other two Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).locations,
locations
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the major drawback would be the impact of the environment since the forest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 needs to be cleared
 and the inhabitants of these forest will suffer. 