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This diagram describes how frog go through different stages of life cycle in the entire period of lifespan.

This diagram describes how frog go through different stages of life cycle in the entire period of lifespan. PrdBd
This diagram describes how frog go through different stages of life cycle in the entire period of lifespan. Overall, there are seven stages shown in the diagram. Eggs hatches into the embryos then to tadpole and finally become adult. In the beginning, eggs given by female frogs hatched to embryos which later develops to tadpole with passage of time. The tadpole stage remains sustain for some time and the growth of different body parts takes place. In the initial phase of this stage, front legs break through form bottom part of body then other parts of bodies comes into existence with time during this stage. In the following stage, commencement of pulmonary breathing take place which help frogs anatomy in the survival of later stage. After the pulmonary stage, tadpole furthur develops to tadpole frog which is also knows as baby frogs. Tadpole frogs learns different tactics of survival from fellow frogs such as hunting, jumping, and hiding in water. Finally, tadpole frogs become adult frog over the period.
This diagram
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describes
how
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frog
go through
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different
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stages
of life cycle in the entire period of lifespan.

Overall
, there are seven
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stages
shown in the diagram.
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Eggs hatches
into the embryos then to
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tadpole
and
finally
become adult.

In the beginning, eggs
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given
by female
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frogs
hatched to embryos which later develops to
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tadpole
with passage of time. The
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tadpole
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stage
remains sustain for
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some
time and the growth of
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different
body parts takes place. In the initial phase of this
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stage
, front legs break through form bottom part of body then other parts of bodies
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comes
into existence with time during this
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stage
. In the following
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stage
, commencement of pulmonary breathing take place which
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help
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frogs
anatomy in the survival of later
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stage
. After the pulmonary
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stage
,
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tadpole
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furthur
develops to
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tadpole
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frog
which is
also
knows as baby
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frogs
.
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Tadpole
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frogs
learns
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different
tactics of survival from fellow
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frogs
such as hunting, jumping, and hiding in water.
Finally
,
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tadpole
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frogs
become adult
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frog
over the period.
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