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The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. 7rONn
The chart illustrates the total amount of calories consumed in seven countries, including China, Brazil, Indonesia, Nigeria, Pakistan, India, and Bangladesh from the year 1975 to 2000. Overall, these seven different countries experienced a rapid increase for calorie consumption over 15 years. There are 2 countries that had a dramatical surge at the end of the period, such as China and Indonesia, in which the consumption of calories plummeted around 1000 amount and achieved its high-point at approximately 3000 in total, making China as the highest calorie consumption among other countries. While these two countries showed an increase, the South Asian countries namely Pakistan, India, and Bangladesh only had a slighter amount of escalation as they gradually climbed by less than 500 calories over the year. This is followed by the only representative of American and African country presented in the chart, Brazil and Nigeria encountered an identical elevation and amounting to less than 3000 in the year of 2000.
The chart illustrates the total amount of calories consumed in seven
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, including China, Brazil, Indonesia, Nigeria, Pakistan, India, and Bangladesh from the year 1975 to 2000.
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, these seven
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experienced a rapid increase for calorie consumption over 15 years.

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that had a
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of the period, such as China and Indonesia, in which the consumption of calories plummeted around 1000
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and achieved its high-point at approximately 3000 in total, making China as the highest calorie consumption among other
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. While these two
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an increase, the South Asian
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had a slighter amount of escalation as they
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representative of American and African
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presented in the chart, Brazil and Nigeria encountered an identical elevation and amounting to less than 3000 in the year of 2000.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000.

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