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This diagram delivers data about recycling of plastic bottles. Overall, there are 9 steps in this process, which begins at disposed plastics and ends at how they are treated and become new products.

This diagram delivers data about recycling of plastic bottles. Overall, there are 9 steps in this process, which begins at disposed plastics and ends at how they are treated and become new products. GJPpe
This diagram delivers data about recycling of plastic bottles. Overall, there are 9 steps in this process, which begins at disposed plastics and ends at how they are treated and become new products. First of all, a plenitude of rubbish would be thrown away and brought to plants, where they will be recycled. After that, in the recycling centre, the staff who play the role of separator will distribute them to recyclable groups and unusable groups. Secondly, there would be a professional machine to press sorted bottles to a lot of blocks and crush all of them to tiny species into water. Thirdly, plastic pellets would be prepared to minimize, which will be heated next and form essential raw material. Furthermore, tons of original material would be packaged carefully and on the way of being produced to other plastic goods or domestic products. Lastly, all of them will be provided to everyone and keep this procedure constantly.
This diagram delivers data about recycling of
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plastic
bottles.
Overall
, there are 9 steps in this process, which
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begins
at disposed
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plastics
and ends at how they
are treated
and become new products.

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First of all
, a plenitude of rubbish would
be thrown
away and brought to plants, where they will
be recycled
. After that, in the recycling
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centre
, the staff who play the role of separator will distribute them to recyclable groups and unusable groups.
Secondly
, there would be a professional machine to press sorted bottles to
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a lot of
blocks and crush all of them to tiny species into water.
Thirdly
,
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plastic
pellets would
be prepared
to minimize, which will
be heated
next
and form essential raw material.
Furthermore
, tons of original material would
be packaged
carefully
and on the way of
being produced
to other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
or domestic products.
Lastly
, all of them will
be provided
to everyone and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
this procedure
constantly
.
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IELTS academic This diagram delivers data about recycling of plastic bottles. Overall, there are 9 steps in this process, which begins at disposed plastics and ends at how they are treated and become new products.

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