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This chart shows Use of water in agriculture domestic and Industrial and also show comparison between the two countries Brazil and congo.

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Chart depicts the uses of water in different sector sectors like agriculture domestic and industrial use also show comparison between the two countries Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo. That use amount of water was used by agriculture sector over a period of time only 500 km cube of Water used in 1900 for agriculture in contrast very low amount of water for industrial and domestic area. It is noticeable that there is a gradually increase the use of water from 1900 to 2000 for agriculture on the other hand use of water remain steady until 1964 for other sector 3000 km cube of Water used for agriculture in 2000 and only 1200 km cube for industrial use. In 1980 gradually increased uses for domestic is about 200 km to the table clearly shows water consumption for Brazil is very high as compared to Congo in 2000. In Brazil 26500km sq. land is irrigated and 100 km sq. in Congo and due to less population in Congo water consumption per person is very less than Brazil at about 8 m cube and 359 meter cube in brazil.
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