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This bar chart shows how second language proficiency varies between males and females in 6 different countries.

This bar chart shows how second language proficiency varies between males and females in 6 different countries. RYbk
This bar chart shows how second language proficiency varies between males and females in 6 different countries. It is immediately apparent that while there is significant regional variation in second language ability, typically a higher percentage of females than males speak a second language well. If we look at males we can see that India has much the greatest proportion of proficient second language speakers at around 55% and China has the least at fewer than 18%. There is only a 10% difference in competency ranging from around 40% to around 30% between Romania, Vietnam, Russia and Thailand in second to fourth places respectively. There are, however, notably more female than male second language speakers in every country with the exception of Thailand. So, India once again leads the way with around 65%, closely followed by Romania and then Vietnam and Russia at 56 and 42% in turn. The two countries with fewest proficient second language speakers are China and Thailand at around 30%. The final point to note is that of the countries in the report, India would appear to have the highest overall proportion of proficient second language speakers and China the least.
This bar chart
shows
how second
language
proficiency varies between
males
and females in 6
different
countries
. It is immediately apparent that while there is significant regional variation in second
language
ability,
typically
a higher percentage of females than
males
speak a second
language
well.

If we look at
males
we can
see
that India has much the greatest proportion of proficient second
language
speakers at
around
55% and China has the least at fewer than 18%. There is
only
a 10% difference in competency ranging from
around
40% to
around
30% between Romania, Vietnam, Russia and Thailand in second to fourth places
respectively
. There are,
however
,
notably
more female than male second
language
speakers in every
country
with the exception of
Thailand.
So
, India once again leads the way with
around
65%,
closely
followed by Romania and then Vietnam and Russia at 56 and 42% in turn. The two
countries
with
fewest
proficient second
language
speakers are China and Thailand at
around
30%. The final point to note is that of the
countries
in the report, India would appear to have the highest
overall
proportion of proficient second
language
speakers and China the least.
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IELTS academic This bar chart shows how second language proficiency varies between males and females in 6 different countries.

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