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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. 9Vmj
A study has been conducted with the intent of discovering the amounts of wast produced by three companies over a period of 15 years, from 2000 to 2015. The first one to be taken into account was company A. Its performances at the start of the enquiry were not brilliant: in fact it appears to be the highest in terms ot tonnes of waste produced, which equal 12. However along the 15 year period during which its activity was analyzed, the company fortunately showed a progressive decrease on its waste production, arriving at a total of approximately 9 tonnes in 2015. The second participant to the reasearch, called B, positioned better than the first, slightly under the threshold of 9 tonnes of waste. Despite having an increase during the first five years, with a peak in 2005, after that year its performances decisely improved, with an admirable drop in waste production, which decreased almost three times in compared to the beginning of the study. Company C, the last one analyzed, gave everybody false hopes. In fact if we watch at how it placed itself in terms of waste production, we are positevely surprised: its perfomances in 2000 were way better than the other participants to the study, with almost three times less tonnes than company A and about a half less than company B. However as it has been said before, these were only false hopes. Despite the great start the society progressively got worse over the years, reaching a waste production higher than 9 tonnes in 2015. In conclusion, we can say that the first two companies, A and B, despite their not so brilliant start, tried to improve their impact on environment, reducing their waste production. It can't be said the same for company C whose perfomarnces got gradually worse each year.
A study has
been conducted
with the intent of discovering the amounts of wast produced by three
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companies
over a period of 15 years, from 2000 to 2015.

The
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first
one to
be taken
into account was
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company
A. Its performances at the
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start
of the
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enquiry
were not brilliant: in fact it appears to be the highest in
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terms ot
tonnes of
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waste
produced, which equal 12.
However
along the 15
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year
period during which its activity
was analyzed
, the
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company
fortunately
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showed
a progressive decrease on its
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waste
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production
, arriving at a total of approximately 9 tonnes in 2015.

The second participant to the
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reasearch
, called B, positioned better than the
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first
,
slightly
under the threshold of 9 tonnes of
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waste
. Despite having an increase during the
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first
five years, with a peak in 2005, after that
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year
its performances
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decisely
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improved
, with an admirable drop in
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waste
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production
, which decreased almost three times in compared to the beginning of the study.

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Company
C, the last one analyzed, gave everybody false hopes. In fact if we
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watch
at how it placed itself in terms of
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waste
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production
, we are
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positevely
surprised: its
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perfomances
in 2000 were way better than the other participants to the study, with almost three times
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less
tonnes than
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company
A and about a half less than
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company
B.
However
as it has
been said
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before
, these were
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only
false hopes. Despite the great
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start
the society
progressively
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got
worse over the years, reaching a
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waste
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production
higher than 9 tonnes in 2015.

In conclusion
, we can say that the
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first
two
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companies
, A and B, despite their not
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so
brilliant
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start
, tried to
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improve
their impact on environment, reducing their
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waste
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production
. It can't
be said
the same for
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company
C whose
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perfomarnces
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got
gradually
worse each
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year
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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