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The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. gMr7

The clearcut comparision is given between birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 till now and trend forecast till 2101 is depicited in the given line graph. Over all, it is crystal Clear that birth rate is higher than death rate in New zealand till now, and in future the trend is set to reverse. It is clear from the chart that in 1901, the birth rate stood higher that the death rate, and this was just over 20 per 1000 population, then compared to fewer than 10 in case of death. Around 1965, the birth rate increased to 65 thousand and then started to decrease gradually. It will settle appropriately to 42 thousand by 2101. Meanwhile, the estimation of death it is expected to rise further and would overtake the rate of birth by 2041. It would be highest between 2061 to 2081 (60 per thousand) and would settle to 55 per thousand by the end of the period.

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