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The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012.

The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012. 9BV0n

The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012. Overall, the town witnessed various transformations, most notably with the elimination of historical and agricultural features to make way for the appearance of more new electric column systems. In 1990, the river was exactly in the middle of the town running from north to south, which divides the town into two sides. Mountains are scattered to both sides of the river. In addition, there was a forest and an ancient structure with rare flora and fauna from north to south to the left of the river, and irrigated farmlands along with villages to the right. Looking at the maps in 2010, with the construction of a hydroelectric power dam, historical and agricultural features disappear and the river expanded to the north becoming a lake to fish while scattered mountains still existed. A hospital was erected on the original site of the villages that were relocated to near the river to the east. Meanwhile, a wide range of electricity poles was built on both sides of the river.

The maps indicate how a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected
 between 1990 and 2012. Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 witnessed various transformations, most notably
 with the elimination of historical and agricultural features to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for the appearance of more new electric column systems.

In 1990, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 was exactly in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 running from north to south, which divides the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 into two sides. Mountains are scattered
 to both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
. In addition
, there was a forest and an ancient structure with rare flora and fauna from north Did you mean "too south to"?too south to
to south to
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, and irrigated farmlands along with villages to the right.

Looking at the maps in 2010, with the construction of a hydroelectric power dam, historical and agricultural features disappear and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 expanded to the north becoming a lake to fish while scattered mountains still
 existed. A hospital was erected
 on the original site of the villages that were relocated
 to near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 to the east. Meanwhile, a wide range of electricity poles was built
 on both sides of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
. 