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The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012.

The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012. 9BV0n
The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012. Overall, the town witnessed various transformations, most notably with the elimination of historical and agricultural features to make way for the appearance of more new electric column systems. In 1990, the river was exactly in the middle of the town running from north to south, which divides the town into two sides. Mountains are scattered to both sides of the river. In addition, there was a forest and an ancient structure with rare flora and fauna from north to south to the left of the river, and irrigated farmlands along with villages to the right. Looking at the maps in 2010, with the construction of a hydroelectric power dam, historical and agricultural features disappear and the river expanded to the north becoming a lake to fish while scattered mountains still existed. A hospital was erected on the original site of the villages that were relocated to near the river to the east. Meanwhile, a wide range of electricity poles was built on both sides of the river.
The maps indicate how a
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town
developed since a hydroelectric power dam
was erected
between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, the
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town
witnessed various transformations, most
notably
with the elimination of historical and agricultural features to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
way for the appearance of more new electric column systems.

In 1990, the
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river
was exactly in the middle of the
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town
running from north to south, which divides the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
into two sides. Mountains
are scattered
to both sides of the
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river
.
In addition
, there was a forest and an ancient structure with rare flora and fauna from north
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to south to
the
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left
of the
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river
, and irrigated farmlands along with villages to the right.

Looking at the maps in 2010, with the construction of a hydroelectric power dam, historical and agricultural features disappear and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
expanded to the north becoming a lake to fish while scattered mountains
still
existed. A hospital
was erected
on the original site of the villages that
were relocated
to near the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
to the east. Meanwhile, a wide range of electricity poles
was built
on both sides of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
river
.
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IELTS academic The maps indicate how a town developed since a hydroelectric power dam was erected between 1990 and 2012.

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