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The diagram below shows life cycle of frogs

The diagram below shows life cycle of frogs EqKYQ
The diagram illustrates the growing stages of frogs. A quick glance at the diagram makes it clear that the growing of frogs lasts within 3 steps, which include life cycle of frogs, starting with mating and ending with becoming a mature frog. The process begins when frog spawn falls into the water, after the mating. In some time, the growing of this spawn of the frog causes the emerging of the little tadpole. All this comes in 2 stages. The third, final step, includes developing frogs and becoming mature ones. After small tadpole emerges, it becomes larger and starts developing. It becomes a young frog, after that, the period of mature frog begins. The frog which has experienced all this points will keep the cycle being continued.
The diagram illustrates the growing stages of
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. A quick glance at the diagram
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it
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that the growing of
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frogs
lasts within 3 steps, which include life cycle of
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, starting with mating and ending with becoming a mature frog.

The process
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when
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frog
spawn falls into the water, after the mating. In
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time, the growing of this spawn of the
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causes the emerging of the
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little
tadpole. All this
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comes
in 2 stages.

The third, final step, includes developing
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frogs
and becoming mature ones. After
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small
tadpole emerges, it becomes larger and
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starts
developing. It becomes a young
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frog
, after that, the period of mature
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frog
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begins
. The
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frog
which has experienced all this points will
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keep
the cycle
being continued
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows life cycle of frogs

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  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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