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These two maps illustrates the changes in an Art Gallery between 2015 and the present time

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The two given maps indicate some differences of the Art Gallery between 2015 and the present time. Overall, the renovation of the present art gallery provides more equipment and new rooms than that of 2015. While everything remained unchanged at the east, almost all the western side was redesigned. The receptionist was relocated to the position which is adjacent to a temporary exhibition and closer to the entrance in the south. In the opposite direction, the stairs were moved more to the left, leading to a reduction of the coffee shop area. Moreover, between the stairs and exhibition room 3 was the appearance of a new lift. The area of exhibition room 4 in the southwestern place was divided equally and replaced by a temporary exhibition and children’s area. In the northwest, the gallery office was converted to a vending machine. The three exhibitions on the right were the only rooms that did not experience any reconstructions.

The two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps indicate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 differences of the Art Gallery between 2015 and the present time.

Overall
, the renovation of the present art gallery provides more equipment and new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 than that of 2015. While everything remained unchanged at the east, almost all the western side was redesigned
.

The receptionist was relocated
 to the position which is adjacent to a temporary exhibition and closer to the entrance in the south. In the opposite direction, the stairs were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 more to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
, leading to a reduction of the coffee shop area. Moreover
, between the stairs and exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 3 was the appearance of a new lift.

The area of exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 4 in the southwestern place was divided
equally
 and replaced by a temporary exhibition and children’s area. In the northwest, the gallery office was converted
 to a vending machine. The three exhibitions on the right were the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 that did not experience any reconstructions. 