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The graph illustrates the tonnage of fruit produced and amount of fertilizer used in a farm per a month in 2013 and the bar chart shows the volume of rainfall received in that year.

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The graph illustrates the tonnage of fruit produced and amount of fertilizer used in a farm per a month in 2013 and the bar chart shows the volume of rainfall received in that year. Overall, the weight of fruit producted was at its highest in September while the weakest figure could be observed in December. The figure for amount of fertillizer used fluctuated widely between zero and about 1 ton. Evermore, the highest rainfall was in February (16 mm) however, the lowest rainfall wes in 3 months namely July, August, September. According to the first trend for fruit producted, during the first four months of the year, the figure stood around 2. 5 tons which is followed by a significant rise of about 2 tons in September. After that the figure dipped sharply and had reached 2 tons by December. The amount of fertilizer used in january was 0. 5 ton and rose slightly to about 1 ton in March. However, this upwared trend was suddenly broken and the fertiliser used declined steeply to zero in June. November, the fertilizer used saw a rather noticeable increase back to over 0. 5 ton but it dropped again in December to under 0. 5 ton. Rainfull initially stood at 12 millimeters in Junuary. After a sudden surge in February (16 Millimeters) it continued to decrease steadily for another 5 months to reach a minimum of just 4 millimeters in July. The figure remained stable at 4 millimeters from July to September, After that the rainfall rose significantly to about 11 millimeters in October which followed by another increas to 14 millimeters in December.
The graph illustrates the tonnage of fruit produced and amount of fertilizer
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used
in a farm per a
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month
in 2013 and the bar chart
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shows
the volume of
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rainfall
received in that year.

Overall
, the weight of fruit
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producted
was at its highest in September while the weakest
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figure
could
be observed
in December. The
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figure
for amount of
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fertillizer
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used
fluctuated
widely
between zero and about 1 ton. Evermore, the highest
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rainfall
was in February (16 mm)
however
, the lowest
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rainfall
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wes
in 3
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months
namely
July, August, September.

According to the
first
trend for fruit
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producted
, during the
first
four
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months
of the year, the
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figure
stood around 2. 5 tons which
is followed
by a significant rise of about 2 tons in September. After that the
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figure
dipped
sharply
and had reached 2 tons by December. The amount of fertilizer
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used
in
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january
was 0. 5 ton and rose
slightly
to about 1 ton in March.
However
, this
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upwared
trend was
suddenly
broken and the
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fertiliser
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used
declined
steeply
to zero in June. November, the fertilizer
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used
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saw
a
rather
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but
it dropped again in December to under 0. 5 ton.

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Rainfull
initially
stood at 12 millimeters in
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Junuary
. After a sudden surge in February (16 Millimeters) it continued to decrease
steadily
for another 5
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months
to reach a minimum of
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just
4 millimeters in July. The
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figure
remained stable at 4 millimeters from July to September, After that the
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rainfall
rose
significantly
to about 11 millimeters in October which followed by another
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increas
to 14 millimeters in December.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the tonnage of fruit produced and amount of fertilizer used in a farm per a month in 2013 and the bar chart shows the volume of rainfall received in that year.

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