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Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the proportion of women who ate five fruit and vegetables per day in the UK increased steadily, these figures for men and children saw a fluctuation.

Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the proportion of women who ate five fruit and vegetables per day in the UK increased steadily, these figures for men and children saw a fluctuation. eK3jV
Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the proportion of women who ate five fruit and vegetables per day in the UK increased steadily, these figures for men and children saw a fluctuation. Another key feature is that the highest figure of people eating different fruits and vegetables were recorded in women. In the first year studied, the rate of women who consumed five fruits and vegetables each day in the UK made up about 25%. A significant growth was experienced in this figure of around 12% until 2006, prior to saw a decline to exactly 30% in the final year examined. 13% and 18% was the percentage of children and men in the UK who ate five various fruits and vegetables every day, respectively. These figures remained unchanged until 2003, before rising respectively to 27% and 28% by 2007. In the next year, a slight decrease was witnessed in both trends, those respectively declined by 3% and 2%.
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each day in the UK made up about 25%. A significant growth
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of around 12% until 2006, prior to
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a decline to exactly 30% in the final year examined.

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IELTS academic Looking at the chart, it is immediately clear that while the proportion of women who ate five fruit and vegetables per day in the UK increased steadily, these figures for men and children saw a fluctuation.

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6.5
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