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These four pie graphs illustrate the source of electricity generation in three types which were conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable in France and German year 2009.

These four pie graphs illustrate the source of electricity generation in three types which were conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable in France and German year 2009. It is measured in billion kWh. In detail, Conventional thermal was the largest source of power in Germany which accounted for 59. 6 percent. Follow by nuclear which was the second largest source made up for 23 percent. Renewavle source provided 17. 4 percent of power in german. Look deeply in renewable source
These four pie graphs illustrate the
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of electricity generation in three types which were conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable in France and German year 2009. It
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kWh. In detail, Conventional thermal was the largest
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source
of power in Germany which accounted for 59. 6 percent. Follow by nuclear which was the second largest
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source
made up for 23 percent.
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Renewavle
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provided 17. 4 percent of power in
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. Look
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IELTS academic These four pie graphs illustrate the source of electricity generation in three types which were conventional thermal, nuclear and renewable in France and German year 2009.

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