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There are a few steps, from digging with special techniques to delivering ready production.

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The diagram reveals the proses how are produced bricks for building industry. There are a few steps, from digging with special techniques to delivering ready production. The first step is that digger takes clay and put into special metal gird. After that clay jump down to soothing place which is roller surface and is moving next standing via this roller face. And at this point, add some sand and water in order to mix well. After being mixed, it is moved to a special box via special crack and go out another crack Presley condition. Subsequently, wire cutter chops were the Presley clay option size and appear air-brick. In order to dry, air-brick move to drying oven and there stay 24-48 hours. After that, start 1 moment of drying moderate temperatures, which are 200°c---980°c. Following this 2 point, consider high temperatures from 870°C to1300°C. And then they cool nextduring 48 - 72 hours at cooling chamber. Finally, this brick packaging to special van and they are delivered to be needed building areas
The diagram reveals the
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proses how
are produced
bricks for building industry. There are a few steps, from digging with
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special
techniques to delivering ready production.

The
first
step is that digger takes clay and put into
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special
metal gird. After that clay jump down to soothing place which is roller surface and is moving
next
standing via this roller face. And at this point,
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add
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some
sand and water in order to mix well. After
being mixed
, it is
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moved
to a
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special
box via
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special
crack and go out another crack Presley condition.
Subsequently
, wire cutter chops were the Presley clay option size and appear air-brick.

In order to dry, air-brick
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to drying oven and there stay 24-48 hours. After that,
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start
1 moment of drying moderate temperatures, which are 200°c---980°c. Following this 2 point, consider high temperatures from
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870°C
to
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "1300 °C"
1300°C
. And then they cool
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nextduring
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48 - 72
hours at cooling chamber.
Finally
, this brick packaging to
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special
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van and
they
are delivered
to
be needed
building areas
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IELTS academic There are a few steps, from digging with special techniques to delivering ready production.

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3 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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