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the graph shows the number of people who went to the movies in the UK between 1990 and 2010

the graph shows the number of people who went to the movies in the UK between 1990 and 2010 Dlw5o

The given line graph illustrates information on the percentage of people who went to the movies in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2010. The people’s attendance is divided into four different groups. Overall, all the rates saw an upward trend throughout the given period despite some harmonic fluctuations. They almost followed a fairly similar pattern until the end of the period. However, the highest rate of all the ages belonged to elderly people throughout the whole time frame. While respectively, the lowest rate was recorded for the youngest group. Between the first five years, all the percentages had an increase, but not as sharp as the group age 24 to 34 (the highest in 1995, about 40% of them). From the beginning of 1995 until 2000, they all interestingly fell and witnessed their lowest rate over the period in 2000. By the next five years, the figure showed a notable and significant rise for all groups by the year 2005. The recordings progressively continued to grow up by getting the last time period, with the exception of the ages 24 to 34 that was remaining steady.

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people
’s attendance is divided
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different
 groups.

Overall
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saw
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period
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some
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 similar pattern until the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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. However
, the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
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 of all the ages belonged to elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 throughout the whole time frame. While respectively
, the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rate
was recorded
 for the youngest group.

Between the first
 five years, all the percentages had an increase, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not as sharp as the group age 24 to 34 (the highest in 1995, about 40% of them). From the beginning of 1995 until 2000, they all interestingly
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rate
 over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 in 2000.

By the next
 five years, the figure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a notable and significant rise for all groups by the year 2005. The recordings progressively
 continued to grow up by getting the last time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
, Consider using "except" or "except for"exceptexcept for
with the exception of
 the ages 24 to 34 that was remaining steady. 