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Theprocess chart shows the process of fish pie

Theprocess chart shows the process of fish pie aJRBw

The given diagram explicates the process of fish pie production line, which made potato fries and fish souce. Overall, there are near about fifteen stage in the process with truck delivery of potatoes ending in store. All steps are very requisite, if one of the step missed whole process will be cease. At the first glance, it is Crystal clear that firstly, they clean potato with water and peel with cutter they make the slices of potatoes with the help of knife. Secondly, they put in containers and add some water the they boil the slices of potatoes. After this stage, they chill the slices and store them. Along with this workers wrap the potatoes slices. After this stage complete, then wrap slices were sent for freezing. Finally, after the freeze, potatoes were send in the store for dispatch. Further reinforcing, they take fresh salmon fish and pour a lemon juice and salt on salmon. Next they stream to the fish with the help of oven. In the next step, the remove the skin and bones of salmon fish and they inspect them, then they prepared a peas after this stage sauce were prepared and labour were wrap them and send for freeze. Eventually, store for dispatch

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given
 diagram explicates the process of fish pie production line, which made You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
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souce
. Overall
, there are near about fifteen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 in the process with truck delivery of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 ending in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
. All steps are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 requisite, if one of the step missed whole process will be Consider using a past participle here: "ceased".ceased
cease
. At the first
 glance, it is Crystal This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that firstly
, they clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potato
 with water and peel with cutter they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchopwedgeportionsliver
slices
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of knife. Secondly
, they put in containers and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
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some
 water Possible typo. Did you mean "the" or "they"?thethey
the they
 boil the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchopwedgeportionsliver
slices
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
, they chill the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchopwedgeportionsliver
slices
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 them. Along with Did you mean "these"?these
this
 workers wrap the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
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slices
. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 complete, then wrap You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchopwedgeportionsliver
slices
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for freezing. Finally
, after the freeze, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyam
potatoes
 were Consider using a past participle here: "sent".sent
send
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 for dispatch. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Further,
Further
 reinforcing, they take fresh salmon fish and pour a lemon juice and salt on salmon. Next
 they stream to the fish with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of oven. In the next
 step, the remove the skin and bones of salmon Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).fish, and
fish and
 they inspect them, then they prepared Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a pea" or simply "peas"?a peapeas
a peas
 after this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 sauce were prepared
 and Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 were wrap them and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 for freeze. Eventually
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 for dispatch