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Theline graph illustrates the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 .

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040. There arethree different countries like Japen, Sweden and USA. In the year of 1940 to 1960, The japan was slight decrease 3%, an Sweder was went up 8%, and USA was climbed upto 10%. After two decade, Japan was rose the population age up to Sweden was fluctuation the population age upto15% andUSA was slight dropped. the population age upto 13%. In the year of 2000 to 2040, Japan population age Sudden increased up to 27%, Sweden population age is dipped up to 25%, and USA population age is sudden grew Upto the 24%. In the year 2040; the highest proportion of population aged is Japan, The mitalle proportion of population aged is sweden and Low proportion of population aged is USA. ). overall, The proportion of population agel 65 and over, In five decades Japan population is 22%. increase, Sweden population aged is. 25% and USA population age is 29 %.
The line graph illustrates the
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up to Sweden was fluctuation the
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13%. In the year of 2000 to 2040,
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Japan
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age

Sudden increased up to 27%, Sweden
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is dipped
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is sudden grew
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65 and over, In five decades
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Japan
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, Sweden
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is 29 %.

IELTS academic Theline graph illustrates the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040.

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