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the world population and distribution of world population by six various regions between 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

the world population and distribution of world population by six various regions between 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Wn2Q0
The given tables illustrate the information about the world population and distribution of world population by six various regions between 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Overall, the world population is projected to have an increase, while Asia will be the higher of the world population in 2050. According to the tables, it can be seen that between 1950 and 2000, the amount of world population went up from 2. 5 billion to 6. 0 billion. This amount is projected to have approximately 9. 0 billion in 2050. Furthermore, Asia and Europe have the number of a citizen of 56% and 22% respectively. This figure was overwhelmingly great than the corresponding of 9% in Africa, 6% in Latin America, 7% in North America and under 1% in Oceania. The rate went higher in 2000 for all regions except North America. Asia’s citizen amount experienced a slight increase to 60% which was 5 times higher than that of Europe. Similarly, Africa, Latin America and Oceania indicated an upward trend of their citizen rates, accounting for 13% and 6% and 1% consecutively. On the contrary, there was a mere decrease in the rate of North America to 5% in the same period. By 2050, the forecast of the figure for Africa’s population will increase to 20%, while Asia, Europe and Northern America will experience a downward trend which accounted for 59% and 7% and 4% respectively. However, the population rate of Latin America and Oceania will remain unchanged.
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and distribution of
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by six various regions between 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.
Overall
, the
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is projected
to have an increase, while Asia will be the
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of the
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in 2050.

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that between 1950 and 2000, the amount of
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went up from 2. 5 billion to 6. 0 billion. This amount
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to have approximately 9. 0 billion in 2050.
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, Asia and Europe have the number of a citizen of 56% and 22%
respectively
. This figure was
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great
than the corresponding of 9% in Africa, 6% in Latin America, 7% in North America and under 1% in Oceania.

The
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went higher in 2000 for all regions except North America. Asia’s citizen amount experienced a slight increase to 60% which was 5 times higher than that of Europe.
Similarly
, Africa, Latin America and Oceania indicated an upward trend of their citizen
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rates
, accounting for 13% and 6% and 1%
consecutively
.
On the contrary
, there was a mere decrease in the
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rate
of North America to 5% in the same period. By 2050, the forecast of the figure for Africa’s
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population
will increase to 20%, while Asia, Europe and Northern America will experience a downward trend which accounted for 59% and 7% and 4%
respectively
.
However
, the
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of Latin America and Oceania will remain unchanged.
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IELTS academic the world population and distribution of world population by six various regions between 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.

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