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Write an example paragraph about your ideal English teacher. What is his or her most important characteristic?

Write an example paragraph about your ideal English teacher. What is his or her most important characteristic? Kl8ER
Each person has their own opinion about an ideal English teacher and so do I. For me, the most important characteristic of an English teacher is passion. For example, he or she can inspires students in their education and their dreams. An ideal teacher must be a brave one; for instance, he or she does not fear of learning new teaching strategies or incorporating new technologies into lessons. He or she always upgrades and renews him or herself as a professional to provide students with the highest quality of education as possible.
Each person has
'Each', 'every', 'either' and 'neither' are used with singular and thus take a singular pronoun: "his", "her", "his or her", "its"
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion about an ideal English teacher and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
do I. For me, the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
characteristic of an English teacher is passion.
For example
, he or she can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "inspire"
inspires
students in their education and their dreams. An ideal teacher
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be a brave one;
for instance
, he or she does not fear of learning new teaching strategies or incorporating new technologies into lessons. He or she always upgrades and renews him or herself as a professional to provide students with the highest quality of education as possible.

IELTS academic Write an example paragraph about your ideal English teacher. What is his or her most important characteristic?

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92 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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