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What’s your favourite brand of computer? Why? What do you use your computer for?

What’s your favourite brand of computer? Why? What do you use your computer for? Nlk0j

My favorite laptop brand is Dell. I like it because it has many advantages and also maybe because it is the first laptop brand that I approach and know. One of the things that I like the most about this laptop is because its speakers are very loud. That's why it meets my music listening needs. Besides, the price of Dell laptops is quite reasonable. I don't need to spend too much money to own a Dell laptop but still get the features in other laptop brands at a higher price. Last but not least, Dell is one of the best companies in the world in terms of customer support as it warrants all products sold without distinction. I usually use my laptop for study and entertainment. for example, when learning about a new field, I will use it to search for information on the internet, or use it to do group exercises with friends through software such as zoom, google meet, . . . After study time, I use it to listen to music or watch movies to relax.

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