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The water cycle is the constant circulation of water on, above, and below the Earth's surface, as illustrated on the diagram.

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The water cycle is the constant circulation of water on, above, and below the Earth's surface, as illustrated on the diagram. Overall, it can be seen from the diagram that three main stages of rain process. To begin with the evaporation of ocean and after the condensation there is fall as rain and absolutely runs back into the oceans again. Having a closer look at the diagram, the first stage beginning at the evaporation of water ocean, and water condenses to form clouds. In addition, the ocean provides around 80% of total air vapour in the atmosphere. The second stage is precipitation, the clouds formattion impacted by the heat of sun, as such fall out as rain. Moreover, the amount of rain falling absorbed by ground and tranformed into groundwater. After that, it flows back to the ocean and the process repeats again.
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cycle is the constant circulation of
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on, above, and below the Earth's surface, as illustrated on the diagram.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
from the diagram that three main stages of
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process. To
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begin
with the evaporation of
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and after the condensation there is fall as
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and
absolutely
runs back into the
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again.

Having a closer look at the diagram, the
first
stage beginning at the evaporation of
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, and
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condenses to form clouds.
In addition
, the
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provides around 80% of total air
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vapour
in the atmosphere. The second stage is precipitation, the clouds
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formattion
impacted by the heat of sun, as such fall out as
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rain
.
Moreover
, the amount of
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falling absorbed by ground and
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tranformed
into groundwater. After that, it flows back to the
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and the process
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IELTS academic The water cycle is the constant circulation of water on, above, and below the Earth's surface, as illustrated on the diagram.

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