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The pie chart below shows the distribution of objects disposed of in sewers in the City of Toronto, Canada.

The pie chart below shows the distribution of objects disposed of in sewers in the City of Toronto, Canada. 06Vd1
The Pie chart illustrates dispersion of number of different object in gutter in the metropolitan of Toronto Canada. It is observed that the majority of waste disposed was Facial Tissue by 17% of totul waste. Furthermore, Cotton Swabs and Razor blades had the almost Same percentages by 12% and 11℅ respectively. Eventually, Chewing Gum as well as table scrape were Same Proportion of waste with 10%. On the other hand, trumpons, huis, Nail Clipping and Medication was between 6% to 8 ℅ of total Object. AT last, the percentage of remaining items were disposed lower than 5 ℅. Overall, it can be seen that the Population of Torrento city is have used tissues in most rather than other things.
The Pie chart illustrates dispersion of number of
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different
object in gutter

in the metropolitan of Toronto Canada.

It
is observed
that the majority of waste disposed was Facial Tissue by 17% of
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totul
waste.
Furthermore
, Cotton Swabs and Razor blades had the almost Same percentages by 12% and 11℅
respectively
.
Eventually
, Chewing Gum
as well
as table scrape were Same Proportion of waste with 10%.

On the other hand
,
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trumpons
,
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huis
, Nail Clipping and Medication was between 6% to 8 ℅ of total Object. AT last, the percentage of remaining items
were disposed
lower than 5 ℅.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the Population of
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Torrento
city is
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have
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used
tissues in most
rather
than other things.

IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the distribution of objects disposed of in sewers in the City of Toronto, Canada.

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