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Thr diagram show the one way of manufacturing of ceramic pots

Thr diagram show the one way of manufacturing of ceramic pots Ogb9N

The illustration highlights various stages involved in the production of ceramic pots. Overall, there are eleven stages in the ceramic pots manufacture from collecting the raw material to completely making the finished products. During the first stage of the ceramic pot production, the raw ingredient is dug out of the ground by a digger and then transported to a factory by a truck. The initial material is transferred via conveyor belt to a crushing machine where it is solely broken down into pieces. The latest product along with a sufficient level of water is then added. It is at this stage of the process that the mixture enters the molding phase which takes between 4 and 6 hours to get an appropriate shape of a clay pot. These clay pots, furthermore, are then heated up to 1000 degrees Celsius in an oven, before being colored by the hand-made method. Finally, the last step involves in heating process for the color to be fully adsorbed into pots surface.

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added
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pots
 surface. 