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The visual plan that is presented below demonstrates the same park in 1920 and how it looks like today

The visual plan that is presented below demonstrates the same park in 1920 and how it looks like today 2xKEb

As can be seen, a lot of changes have been applied to the park. Most of all, these are the changes in gardens, pond and seats. One of the rose gardens have been removed today while the other one has been replaced in a square shape that is surrounded by four seats on each side. Stage of musicians, where music was performed in 1920 has been redesigned into an amphitheatre for concerts. While there have been five seats 80 years ago there is now only four that are around a rose garden which now covers the place where fountain was placed in 1920. Pond for water plants was also removed and now there is a children’s play area there. Glass house has been transformed into a water feature. After all, the underground car parking station was build in the last few years. The entrance of it is above the water feature, on the right side of the park.

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