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The variety of the opportunity in recent days is believed by some people. I will provide detailed information and examples about the topic, before providing my own opinion.

The variety of the opportunity in recent days is believed by some people. I will provide detailed information and examples about the topic, before providing my own opinion. 2aqjw
Considering the development of almost all areas over the years, nowadays crowd have too numerous choices than in the past. The education sector can be considered as an example of this situation. The enhancement of the network between countries provides the chance for students to study abroad with global scholarships. It is true that students had an opportunity to get an education in another country in the old years as well, on the contrary candidates had only limited options due to the fact of the lack of political relations between other countries in those years. After the establishment of the international organizations, they have several options in the process of country selection. For instance, In the 20th century, Azerbaijani students had the opportunity to study only in the region of the USSR. But now they have the option to study in any country. In addition, increasing international market competition has a direct impact on business development. Almost every day new companies open, and this means new jobs for people. Demand and supply have changed, companies chose workers because there were few jobs and workers were selected by companies in the past. But, now the number of the companies are increasing day by day and employees have a chance to select the best companies for work. In conclusion, I think as mentioned on the topic people have too a number of choices (now) than in past years in various situations. Consequently, I agree with the topic and give a number of examples related to the education and working sector as a piece of evidence.
Considering the development of almost all areas over the years, nowadays crowd have too numerous choices than in the past. The education sector can
be considered
as an example of this situation. The enhancement of the network between
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countries
provides the chance for students to study abroad with global scholarships. It is true that students had an opportunity to
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get
an education in another
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country
in the
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old
years
as well
,
on the contrary
candidates had
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only
limited options due to the fact of the lack of political relations between other
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countries
in those years. After the establishment of the international organizations, they have several options in the process of
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country
selection.
For instance
, In the 20th century, Azerbaijani students had the opportunity to study
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only
in the region of the USSR.
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But
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now
they have the option to study in any country.

In addition
, increasing international market competition has a direct impact on business development. Almost every day new
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companies
open, and this means new jobs for
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people
. Demand and supply have
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changed
,
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companies
chose workers
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because
there were few jobs and workers
were selected
by
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companies
in the past.
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But
,
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now
the number of the
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companies
are increasing day by day and employees have a chance to select the best
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companies
for work.

In conclusion
, I
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think
as mentioned on the topic
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people
have
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too a
number of choices (
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now
) than in past years in various situations.
Consequently
, I
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agree
with the topic and give a number of examples related to the education and working sector as a piece of evidence.

IELTS academic The variety of the opportunity in recent days is believed by some people. I will provide detailed information and examples about the topic, before providing my own opinion.

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