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The variations in Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue

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The variations in Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue are illustrated in this diagram. It sorts out the differences before and after the installation of wider street walks, a new crossing, the bicycle lanes, and the street trees, i. e. , this helps in identifying the benefits of differences made in avenues. First of all, the street trees provide huge shelter during sunny days when using the sidewalks, with wider sidewalks it reduces traffic during busy business days and to those who take walk more frequently, then the bicycle lane which is adjacent to sidewalks encourages the people to use the bicycles often and combined with the installation of the new crossing path enhances the safety of the people who take crosses. To summarize, this proposal would make a better environment for pedestrians and cyclists and make the road safer and a better route to take.

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before
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 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
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 in identifying the benefits of differences made in avenues.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the street trees provide huge shelter during sunny days when using the sidewalks, with wider sidewalks it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reduces
 traffic during busy business days and to those who take walk more frequently
, then the bicycle lane which is adjacent to sidewalks encourages the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the bicycles This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 and combined with the installation of the new crossing path enhances the safety of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who take crosses.

To summarize
, this proposal would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a better environment for pedestrians and cyclists and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the road safer and a better route to take. 