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The process below shows the recycling process of aluminium drink cans.

The process below shows the recycling process of aluminium drink cans. Mq2We
The diagram depict information about the recycling of aluminium drink cans. At a glance, it is observed that there are three stages in the recycling of aluminium drink cans from collection centre to recycling centre and then into last stage aluminium recycling plant where further four stages. Primarily, drinks from drinks machines send to collection centre where cans of drink are being select. Afterward, cans send to recycling center by the help of truck. In that stage main recycle process begin. After recycling of cans, it send to aluminium recycling plant where four stages follow to recycle aluminium cans. Firstly, in that aluminium recycling plant, melt the old aluminium to became new aluminium. Post that, aluminium role become ready from new aluminium and then new cans make and these cans send to drinks machine consequently this process recycle again in similar pattern.
The diagram depict information about the
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is observed
that there are three
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stages
in the
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recycling
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aluminium
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drink
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cans
from collection
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centre
to
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centre
and then into last
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stage
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aluminium
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recycling
plant where
further
four
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stages
.
Primarily
,
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drinks
from
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drinks
machines
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send
to collection
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centre
where
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cans
of
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drink
are being select. Afterward,
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cans
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send
to
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recycling
center by the
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help
of truck. In that
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stage
main recycle process
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begin
. After
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, it
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aluminium
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old
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to became new
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. Post that,
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role become ready from new
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aluminium
and then new
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cans
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make
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consequently
this process recycle again in similar pattern.
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IELTS academic The process below shows the recycling process of aluminium drink cans.

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2 paragraphs
142 words
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