Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The two plans below show Pancha village in 2005 and 2015

The two plans below show Pancha village in 2005 and 2015 G02B
The given maps show transition take place in Pancha village between 2005 and 2015. In general, the village had experienced a drastic infrastructure development during this 10 years. In 2005, the north east part of the village had a primary school with two building, but in 2015 new buildings ws built and upgraded into secondary school. The house behind the school took antenna connection in 2015, whereas the near to houses were disappeared. Between 2005 and 2015, the number of building in Pagoda was increased and the size was reduced. In 2015, as the part of road development, traffic sign boards were established near to read. In stone path in 2005 was converted into modern road along with zebra crossing in 2015. The village had no electricity connection in 2005, but the electricity line was established near by the road. In 2015, the houses were modernized by taking anteena connection. The small market were situated next to the house where expanded the number of shops. In thr south west part of the village new tower was constructed in 2015. Overall, the village gone through various development during the 10 year, such as education system, communication and transportation.
The
given
maps
show
transition take place in
Pancha
village
between 2005 and 2015.
In general
, the
village
had experienced a drastic infrastructure development during this 10 years. In 2005, the
north east
part of the
village
had a primary school with two building,
but
in 2015 new buildings
ws
built and upgraded into secondary school. The
house
behind the school took antenna connection in 2015, whereas the near to
houses
were disappeared
. Between 2005 and 2015, the number of building in Pagoda
was increased
and the size was
reduced
. In 2015, as the part of road development, traffic
sign
boards
were established
near to read. In stone path in 2005
was converted
into modern road along with zebra crossing in 2015. The
village
had no electricity connection in 2005,
but
the electricity line
was established
near by
the road. In 2015, the
houses
were modernized
by taking
anteena
connection. The
small
market
were situated
next
to the
house
where expanded the number of shops. In
thr
south west
part of the
village
new tower
was constructed
in 2015.
Overall
, the
village
gone through various development during the 10 year, such as education system, communication and transportation.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The two plans below show Pancha village in 2005 and 2015

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: