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The two pie charts show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for twenty years ago and last year.

The two pie charts show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for twenty years ago and last year. 6NbK3
The two pie charts show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for twenty years ago and last year. The various sources of energy used in Scotland and the amount of energy gained from each of them have not significantly changed when comparing the values from last year and twenty years ago. The greatest amount of electricity was generated from coal, with 41. 4% being generated twenty years ago and 32. 7% being generated last year; however, the sources of the energy generation have spread out more, when looking at last year's data. Compared to twenty years ago, Scotland has made slight changes to its reliance on certain sources for the generation of electricity. Although the major generator remains as coal (followed again by gas), there has been an increase in the use of oil (from 2. 1% to 4. 0%), nuclear energy (from 19. 6% to 26. 4%) and other renewable sources (from 2. 8% to 5. 1%). The most significant changes would be to the use of oil and other renewable sources, as the use of these two sources last year was almost double the percentage of electricity that was being generated from them twenty years ago.
The two pie charts
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in Scotland for twenty years ago and last year.

The various
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of
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used
in Scotland and the amount of
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energy
gained from each of them have not
significantly
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when comparing the values from last
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and twenty years ago.
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greatest amount of
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was
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from coal, with 41. 4% being
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twenty years ago and 32. 7% being
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last
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;
however
, the
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of the
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generation have spread out more, when looking at last year's data.

Compared to twenty years ago, Scotland has made slight
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changes
to its reliance on certain
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sources
for the generation of
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electricity
. Although the major generator remains as coal (followed again by gas), there has been an increase in the
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use
of oil (from 2. 1% to 4. 0%), nuclear
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energy
(from 19. 6% to 26. 4%) and other renewable
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(from 2. 8% to 5. 1%). The most significant
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would be to the
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use
of oil and other renewable
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, as the
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of these two
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last
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was almost double the percentage of
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electricity
that was being
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from them twenty years ago.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for twenty years ago and last year.

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