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The two pie charts provides information about proportion of expenditure of different types of media on advertisement in india between 2012 and 2017. Overall, television media was contributed more and followed by print in both beginning and end of the time period and cinema did not spend money for advertisements. In 2012, the chart showed television sector contributed with 43 percentage and it was the highest percentage in this year followed by print media with 38 percentage. However, other medias like radio, digital, and outdoor were contributes 1 percentage difference between these with 7, 6, 5 percentages respectively. Were, In this year outdoor contributes least percentage. In 2017, also TV expenditured more amount and followed by print and digital media respectively. However, outdoor sector remained same as in 2012 with 5 percentage. Here, radio media had contributes least with 4percentage. Cinema was does not spent any amount on ads in both years in india.
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in this year followed by print
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with 38
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like radio, digital, and outdoor were contributes 1
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difference between these with 7, 6, 5
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