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The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percentagewise in the years 2000 and 2016.

The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percentagewise in the years 2000 and 2016. Overall, at the beginning of the period construction contributed the least to the economy of Turkey and agriculture was the most significant economic sector. In comparison, at the end of the period healthcare and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by financial, business and other services. Construction sector accounted for 3% of Turkey's economy in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and experienced a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of Turkey's economy, respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016. Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey's economy in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000 economic outputs from government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17%, respectively, and both decreased by 3% after 16-year period. In contrast, contribution from healthcare and education sector remained constant in both years at 17%.
The two pie charts illustrate how
different
industry
sectors
contributed to the
economy
of Turkey
percentagewise
in the years 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, at the beginning of the
period
construction contributed the least to the
economy
of Turkey and agriculture was the most significant
economic
sector
.
In comparison
, at the
end
of the
period
healthcare and education became the largest
economic
segment and the lowest contribution
was made
by financial, business and other services. Construction
sector
accounted for 3% of Turkey's
economy
in 2000, and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016.
Economic
income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and experienced a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the
period
, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of Turkey's
economy
,
respectively
, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016.

Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of Turkey's
economy
in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000
economic
outputs from
government
and leisure and hospitality
sectors
were at 12% and 17%,
respectively
, and both decreased by 3% after 16-year
period
.
In contrast
, contribution from healthcare and education
sector
remained constant in both years at 17%.
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IELTS academic The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of Turkey percentagewise in the years 2000 and 2016.

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