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the two maps show the island's devolopment

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The two maps illustrate how the island was developed over the period in terms of construction of tourist amenities. Overall, Although the island's size was only one hundred meters, it changed considerably throughout the period. The most significant changes were observed in the establishment of hotels and restaurants. Firstly, the most marked change was the development of accommodation of foreigners, A reception area was placed at the center of the island, surronded by Vehicle tracks. Additionally, there were 6 huts built on the east side while 9 huts were placed to the east of the reception area. Meanwhile, To the north of the reception counter, a restaurant was connected through automobile tracks. Though there were extreme changes in tourist facilities, this did not affect the trees all over the island. The beach was converted to a facility where it included swimming. Furthermore, all of the hotels and the other facilities were linked through Footpaths and Vehicle tracks. Moreover, A pier was constructed to the south of the island where boats were parked.

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tracks
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changes
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. The beach was converted
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all of the
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tracks
. Moreover
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island
 where boats were parked
. 