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U.S Energy consumption by Fuel

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The bar graph provided illustrates the amount of energy utilization in the USA from 1980 until 2030. Units are measured in quadrillion. Overall petrol, oil and coal usage showed a relative growth, while other types of fuel experienced almost no change in that period of time. The quantity of petrol and oil consumption after a meager drop in 1985, with 5 units, climbed slightly and it is forecasted to reach an apex in 2030, at 50 units. The usage of coal increased negligibly in this period and It is predicted to hit its peak in 2030, with 30 units. Regarding the natural gas consumption after a slight oscillation until 2015, it will be stabilized, at 25 units, in 2030. Turning to the other kind of fuels, nuclear, solar and wind energies rose minimally and they will increase in 2030, with the same amount 5 units. However, the making use of hydropower fluctuated slightly until 2005 and it is predicted to remain at the same number, with mere 3 units, in 2030.
The bar graph provided illustrates the amount of energy utilization in the USA from 1980 until 2030.
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Units
are measured
in quadrillion.
Overall
petrol, oil and coal usage
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showed
a relative growth, while other types of fuel experienced almost no
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change
in that period of time.

The quantity of petrol and oil consumption after a meager drop in 1985, with 5
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units
, climbed
slightly
and it
is forecasted
to reach an apex in 2030, at 50
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units
. The usage of coal increased
negligibly
in this period and It
is predicted
to hit its peak in 2030, with 30
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units
. Regarding the natural gas consumption after a slight oscillation until 2015, it will
be stabilized
, at 25
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units
, in 2030.

Turning to the other kind of fuels, nuclear, solar and wind energies rose
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minimally and
they will increase in 2030, with the same amount 5
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units
.
However
, the making
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use
of hydropower fluctuated
slightly
until 2005 and it
is predicted
to remain at the same number, with mere 3
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units
, in 2030.
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IELTS academic U.S Energy consumption by Fuel

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6.5
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