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the diagram show how to recycle waste into compost

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The picture illustrates how compost are made. Overall, there are 5 main stages in the process of making fertilizer, beginning with plastic container making and ending with the production of compost. To begin with, the plastic container with 2 cubic meters height is required. The plastic is also cut out for a hole in the two side body of container to air ventilation. The second stage is that collection of newspaper, grass, food and waste are put into the container following a level of every 15 cm height, respectively. At the following stage, nitrogen and hot water only are added to the process of disposal waste into compost. After that, the container are closed to heat for 6 months period. At the final stage, waste are completely metabolism into compost which in advance to use in the cultivation.
The picture illustrates how compost
are made
.
Overall
, there are 5 main
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stages
in the process of making fertilizer, beginning with plastic
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container
making and ending with the production of compost.

To
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begin
with, the plastic
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container
with 2 cubic meters height
is required
. The plastic is
also
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cut
out for a hole in the two side body of
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container
to air ventilation. The second
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stage
is that collection of newspaper, grass, food and waste
are put
into the
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container
following a level of every 15 cm height,
respectively
.

At the following
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stage
, nitrogen and hot water
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only
are
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added
to the process of disposal waste into compost. After that, the
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container
are closed
to heat for 6 months period. At the final
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stage
, waste are completely metabolism into compost which in advance to
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use
in the cultivation.

IELTS academic the diagram show how to recycle waste into compost

Academic
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3 paragraphs
138 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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