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This line chart illustrates the Information Regarding the commitment Of crimes such as burglary car theft and robbery In different area of Manchester City Centre from 2003-2012 From an overall perspective, it is clear That the number of burglary crime was initially low What with time it got Hai and later on, it keep on fluctuating. While talking about the car theft crime, It remained nearly same but, there was a fluctuation with passing Years and robbery was low in first year But it got frustrated after that. Meticulously Observing the line graph, it is crystal clear that the number of burglary Crime in 2003 was around 3400. But, after one year, it got increased from 3400 to 3700 and in the next year, it got decreased to 3100 and in 2006, the number of burglary Crimewatch 2600. After that the number of burglary Crime keeps on fluctuating and in the last year which was 2012 the number of crime was around 1400. Proving for the illustration, it is witnessed That the number of Car theft Crime in 2003 was around 2300 and it got slightly increased in 2004. In 2005, the number of car theft Crime was went slightly low then slightly high in next year in 2012, the number of car theft Crime was around 3800. Where as observe The robbery crime rate, It can be seen that the number of robbery crime in 2003 and 600 and later on it goes on increased and decreased while reaching the year 2012, the number of cars was around 600.
This line chart illustrates the Information Regarding the commitment Of
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area of Manchester City
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Centre
from 2003-2012

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overall
perspective, it is
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clear
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number
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burglary
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crime
was
initially
low What with time it
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got
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Hai
and later on, it
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keep
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car
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theft
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crime
, It remained
nearly
same
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but
, there was a fluctuation with passing Years and
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robbery
was low in
first
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year
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But
it
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frustrated after that.

Meticulously
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clear
that the
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number
of
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burglary
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in 2003 was
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around
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, after one
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year
, it
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increased from 3400 to 3700 and in the
next
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, it
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decreased to 3100 and in 2006, the
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number
of
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burglary
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Crimewatch
2600. After that the
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year
which was 2012 the
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crime
was
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around
1400.

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number
of
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Car
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theft
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Crime
in 2003 was
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around
2300 and it
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got
slightly
increased in 2004. In 2005, the
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number
of
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car
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theft
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was
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seen
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crime
in 2003 and 600 and later on it goes on increased and decreased while reaching the
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year
2012, the
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of
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cars
was
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around
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6.0
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