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The two maps show the developments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from the year of 2000 and 2013.

The two maps show the developments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from the year of 2000 and 2013. 1a3GW
In general, the resort became to have more new facilities and transportation system which changed the rural area to the urban side during 13 years. In 2000, the resort used to be a green natural area with single dwellings and public facilities such as school, hospital and a railway station while the year 2013 witnessed the dramatic developments. One striking thing is the trees and houses had been demolished to make way for a factory in the right side of the river. And another noticeable change is an extension of the railway along the coastline. Moreover, the sea had been used for the transportation of car in 2005. In the southwest of the map, supermarket and some blocks of flats had been constructed in the area which used to be a green resident one in 2000. In 2013, the resort become more populated and some of the trees had been cut down to give way to three blocks of flats near the lake. The woodland was cleared for a new stretch of the airport in the right side of the river.
In general
, the resort became to have more new facilities and transportation system which
changed
the rural area to the urban side during 13 years.

In 2000, the resort
used
to be a green natural area with single dwellings and public facilities such as school, hospital and a railway station while the year 2013 witnessed the dramatic developments. One striking thing is the trees and
houses
had
been demolished
to
make
way for a factory
in the right side
of the river. And another noticeable
change
is an extension of the railway along the coastline.
Moreover
, the sea had been
used
for the transportation of car in 2005.

In the southwest of the map, supermarket and
some
blocks of flats had
been constructed
in the area which
used
to be a green resident one in 2000. In 2013, the resort become more populated and
some of the
trees had been
cut
down to give way to three blocks of flats near the lake. The woodland
was cleared
for a new stretch of the airport
in the right side
of the river.
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IELTS academic The two maps show the developments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton from the year of 2000 and 2013.

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