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The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in water cycle and the different forms that water takes in this process.

The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in water cycle and the different forms that water takes in this process. wKxn3
The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in water cycle and the different forms that water takes in this process. Overall, this process is cyclic and consists of several steps beginning from evaporation of water from the ocean to the formation of snow and ground water. This results in the continuous movement of water in the atmosphere, on and below the surface of the Earth. At first, water evaporates from the ocean due to the heat of the sun, contributing about 80% of water vapour in the atmosphere. Then, it undergoes condensation which consequently results in the formation of clouds. At this stage, precipitation occurs in the clouds causing a rainfall or snow in the hilly regions. In case of a rainfall, the water runs off the surface and flows in to lakes. When rainwater seeps into the impervious layer of the ground, it results in the formation of ground water. Once the water that runs off the surface to the lakes, salt water often intrudes and eventually mixes with the ocean.
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cycle and the
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forms that
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takes in this process.

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, this process is cyclic and consists of several steps beginning from evaporation of
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from the ocean to the formation of snow and ground
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. This results in the continuous movement of
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in the atmosphere, on and below the surface of the Earth.

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,
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evaporates from the ocean due to the heat of the sun, contributing about 80% of
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in the atmosphere. Then, it undergoes condensation which
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results in the formation of clouds. At this stage, precipitation occurs in the clouds causing a rainfall or snow in the hilly regions. In case of a rainfall, the
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water
runs off the surface and flows in to lakes. When rainwater seeps into the impervious layer of the ground, it results in the formation of ground
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. Once the
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that runs off the surface to the lakes, salt
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intrudes and
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mixes with the ocean.
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IELTS academic The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in water cycle and the different forms that water takes in this process.

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