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The two maps show how a trade floor was planned to change between 2009 and 2010.

The two maps show how a trade floor was planned to change between 2009 and 2010. Kn753

The two maps show how a trade floor was planned to change between 2009 and 2010. The most striking feature is that almost all the positions of rooms in the floor were changed but not many places were about to be newly constructed. As can be seen, in the north of this floor, both the main entrance and side entrance did not witness any change of position over that period. In addition, with regard to the wide balcony running along the east floor, there was a lounge area added with it. The refreshment between the main entrance and side entrance was planned to swapped with each other. Similarly, the large conference hall with twelve seats and one stage according to the 2009 drawing was moved to the corner in the southeast and narrowed to have half of the previous number of seats in 2010. In contrast, the southeastern exhibition area was expected to replace the conference hall’s position and be expanded in size with 24 display stands covering the nearby meeting room during that time.

The two maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how a trade You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcanvasflooringdeckgroundrugbasement
floor
was planned
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 between 2009 and 2010.

The most striking feature is that almost all the positions of rooms in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcanvasflooringdeckgroundrugbasement
floor
 were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places were about to be newly
 constructed.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, in the north of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcanvasflooringdeckgroundrugbasement
floor
, both the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and side You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 did not witness any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of position over that period. In addition
, with regard to the wide balcony running along the east You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcanvasflooringdeckgroundrugbasement
floor
, there was a lounge area This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with it.

The refreshment between the main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 and side You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
was planned
 to swapped with each other. Similarly
, the large conference hall with twelve seats and one stage according to the 2009 drawing was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the corner in the southeast and narrowed to have half of the previous number of seats in 2010. In contrast
, the southeastern exhibition area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to replace the conference hall’s position and be expanded
 in size with 24 display stands covering the nearby meeting room during that time. 