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the graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

the graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime. OMJpN
There are some dangers where people live and there is a likelihood of being a victiom of crime. As it is shown, the most noticeable crime was car crime that happened in 2009. It is illustrated that the most likelihood of being a viction was also for this kind of crime. The actual likelihood of being a victiom didn't have any significant change from 2009 to 2010. Based on the graph, burglary and violent crime danger are the same and there is no difference between years 2009 to 2010. But the significant point is that the danger of this kind of crime was reduced during that year. The actual likelihood of being a victom in burglary is less than violent crime in 2009. Based on the graph, it is concluded that car crime was the most dangerous crime between years 2009 and 2010.
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dangers
where
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victiom
of crime.

As it
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, the most noticeable
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crime
was car
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crime
that happened in 2009. It
is illustrated
that the most
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likelihood
of being a
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viction
was
also
for this kind of
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crime
. The actual
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likelihood
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victiom
didn't have any significant
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change
from 2009 to 2010. Based on the graph, burglary and violent
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crime
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danger
are the same and there is no difference between years 2009 to 2010.
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the significant point is that the
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danger
of this kind of
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crime
was
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reduced
during that year. The actual
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likelihood
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victom
in burglary is less than violent
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crime
in 2009.

Based on the graph, it
is concluded
that car
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crime
was the most
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dangerous
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crime
between years 2009 and 2010.

IELTS academic the graph below shows the perceived danger and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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