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The two maps show changes Sunny Hills University between 1995 to today.

The two maps show changes Sunny Hills University between 1995 to today. B7Jga

In 1995, the original university were much greener with large space but during the next 26 years the university experience a significant modern university. The most noticeable change is that all of the all trees west of the university were cut down and replace by two halls of residence. Moreover, the halls of residence was knocked down to putting up the Arts Building. In addition, the main reception was relocated from near Wastson to northwest university to expanding the Watson building. While the Founders building remained, Student union and Scott library were relocated from the West to Eat of the campus. There was another major change was that Bus stop was flattened to building a car park.

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