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The two maps illustrate the development which occurs in the waterfront area of a town called Darwin in 2009 and 2014

The two maps illustrate the development which occurs in the waterfront area of a town called Darwin in 2009 and 2014 W8M5b

The two maps illustrate the development which occurs in the waterfront area of a town called Darwin in 2009 and 2014 It is clear that there were many differences between 2009 and 2014. In addition, most of the changes in the South. The industrial area was demolished moreover the education and creation facilities appeared. The trees were more planted. In 2009, the industrial area was located in the Northwest with a lake and many trees which was surrounded by footpaths but the industrial revolution was destroyed and replaced by a swimming pool, the lake and the trees were still existed. Outside the footpath, the school and convenience center were situated which remained unchanged from 2009 to 2014. The fishing and the swimming pool was established in the Northeast, 2014 the fishing and the swimming pool were remained. The industrial area take up the size of half the map in 2009, and that was destroyed followed by the construction of many trees in 2014. Many trees were planted in the Southwest. In addition, there was a footpath that was erected to pass through the harbour. In 2009, only the sea was appeared in the map, but in 2014 the harbour was built in the sea. In the west of the map, the university building was constructed. And the appearance of the house more than before

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maps
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 of a town called Darwin in 2009 and 2014

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clear
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many
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changes
 in the South. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechnicalmodernmechanicalindustrialized
industrial
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area
was demolished
moreover
 the education and creation facilities appeared. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 were more planted.

In 2009, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechnicalmodernmechanicalindustrialized
industrial
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area
was located
 in the Northwest with a lake and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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trees
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but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtechnicalmodernmechanicalindustrialized
industrial
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destroyed
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trees
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 which remained unchanged from 2009 to 2014. The fishing and the swimming pool was established
 in the Northeast, 2014 the fishing and the swimming pool were remained
.

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industrial
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area
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trees
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trees
were planted
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harbour
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only
 the sea was appeared
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpicturesketchoutlinegraphdesignplan
map
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but
 in 2014 the Possible spelling mistake. 'harbour' is British English.harbor
harbour
was built
 in the sea. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
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. And the appearance of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
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