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The two maps illustrate the changes taking place in a seaside village from 1995 until the present moment.

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The two maps illustrate the changes taking place in a seaside village from 1995 until the present moment. Overall, the Ryemouth village has witnessed some radical development. We can see clearly that there are additional facilities such as a golf court, tennis courts, etc. The most notable changes are the destruction of the forest park and the replacement of farmland by areas for playing golf and tennis. The road running in the north-south direction has been extended to the west. The hotel in the southeast of Ryemouth has added a new car park and the shops alongside the road roughly paralleling to the seaside have been taken over by restaurants. In regard to the south of the village, whereas the fish market has been changed into a block of apartments, the café on the right-handed has remained unchanged. In addition, the fishing port that existed in the past has now been removed.
The two maps illustrate the
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changes
taking place in a seaside village from 1995 until the present moment.

Overall
, the
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Ryemouth
village has witnessed
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some
radical development. We can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
clearly
that there are additional facilities such as a golf court, tennis courts, etc.

The most notable
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changes
are the destruction of the forest park and the replacement of farmland by areas for playing golf and tennis. The road running in the north-south direction has
been extended
to the west.
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The
hotel in the southeast of
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Ryemouth
has
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added
a new car park and the shops alongside the road roughly paralleling to the seaside have
been taken
over by restaurants.

In regard to the south of the village, whereas the fish market has been
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changed
into a block of apartments, the café on the right-handed has remained unchanged.
In addition
, the fishing port that existed in the past has
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now
been removed
.
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IELTS academic The two maps illustrate the changes taking place in a seaside village from 1995 until the present moment.

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4 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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